The sun goes down across the sound
The sky across the water shimmers
I see your footsteps in the sand
Your fading silhouette gets dimmer
In this moment my dreams abound
For fear of loss recedes and withers
My love for you is strong as hewn
From landscapes framed in moon.
© Alison Jean Hankinson.
This was really hard, it was for d’Verse and we were challenged to write in a form called Ottava Rima. This was beautiful Morecambe Bay Sands .
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Beautiful words with an amazing photograph!
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Very nice description of the strength of your love. I like how the first six lines built up toward those last two.
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Lovely imagery!
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Beautiful write and photo!
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I love the rhythm of alternating masculine and feminine rhymes in the first 6 lines.
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This is gorgeous, Alison!
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Really beautiful, thanks for sharing.
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