Bramble Berry
Crabapple jelly
Michaelmas daisies
Just for show.
Radiant roses revived
Through storms survived
Whilst rosehips scattered
On the ground below.
A sliver of sun flitters through the clouds.
©Alison Jean Hankinson
This is for Weekend Mini-Challenge at imaginary garden with real toads


This has a very Zen feel to it, the closing line in particular throws that kind of frame around it for me.
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Thank you. It was a very small sliver of sun…
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nothing binding in a bad way here Alison:) sugary sweetness
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Such a delightful read, Alison ❤️ especially like; “Radiant roses revived through storms survived.”
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Thank you. XXXX
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Nicely done, especially that closing line.
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You have captured the essence of the garden in these lines . Beautiful depiction.
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I so love how you start the poem… lovely
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I think each of us has within the desire to be a wild rose… to bloom and not face the damning of life that wilts
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That sliver of sunlight gives hope for a better day.
namaste
JzB
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the life force of a garden… nicely penned.
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Thank you. XXX
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